Queen of The Camp

      She was elegant and beautiful. This camp would be nothing with out her. She was the suppose "Queen of The Camp" I was the new kid, the suppose "ROOKIE" this camp was a camp that the longer you were here the most respect you had this girl, she was the most respected person in this camp. She was the nicest one as well. She would help the Rookies or anyone that needed help. She always had people around her that helped her and helped others. If you needed advice you go to her, but there would always be a line up.

         Well I had no problems, well I guess there was just one I had no friends. This was a new place and I never been here my parents just signed me up cause their friends recommended it, I was just forced to go.  I was assigned to this 4 person cabin and I was actually a little excited and worried will these new people enjoy me? I took a few seconds before walking in to pump my self  to be more confident. I felt calm and confident so I took a deep breathe in and out and walked in the steps making a noise when stepping on them. I expected that they knew someone was coming in.

        When I opened the door they all looked at me one girl doing her nails another reading a book and the last one just standing looking at me. I introduced myself. "Hello, my name is Ina. It's nice to meet you all" Ina said waving toward all of them. The dark skinned girl moves and says "Hello, my name is Alicia nice to meet you as well" She then pointed at the girl doing her nails "That's Ashley" Ashley waved and gave me a cheerful smile. Alicia then pointed at the girl reading a book "That's Michelle" Michelle looked up gave a nice grin then looked down at her book. Alicia pointed out where I was going to sleep. I unpacked and got ready for sleep. "How long have you guys been going to this camp?" I asked them. Alicia answered " This is all of our second year"

         I then went to sleep, it's been a long day and I need this sleep I thought to myself. The next day I woke up noticing that only Michelle was there everyone else had left. "Good morning, how was your sleep?" She asked. "I answered it was really good actually, surprisingly" I answered back. I got up and got dressed."Well we have to go get breakfast at the cafeteria, everyone is waiting for us" Michelle answered. We walked out of the cabin headed to the cafeteria when we got there we noticed that there was one table that was set a little bit higher then the rest and I noticed the girl sitting there the suppose "Queen of The Camp" I tried to sit as close as I could to her so I could get better look.

But my roommates waved me over to their table so I had to go there so I could have some friends at this camp. I understood that I was a rookie and I was not treated as much respect as everyone else. But I just want to talk to her, there is just something about her that wanted me to talk to her. It was like I had a connection with her. "Everything all right Ina?" Alicia asked me. I woke from my day dream shaking my head a little I answered. "Yeah, I was just thinking about something"
"About what?" she asked.
"If there's any boys in this camp" I said laughing.
"I know there isn't this is an all girl camp, I know I want to see some boys as well but there over on the other side of the lake which is pretty far from here. I guess they wanted us to stay away from each other that's why we're so far away from each other" Ashley said.
"That sucks" I said eating my food one gulp after another, the food was okay. But I still miss my home made food. I was from Canada and I came down to USA for this camp. In Canada they don't have camps like this  and I was suppose to stay with my Dad down here but he had something to do so he sent me off to this camp. 

On one night of being to camp there was a black out none of the lights we working. It was pitch black, you could see nothing the clouds covered the sky only giving a little light but did not help the problem. There was complete chaos I got pushed in different directions girls screaming. Then a loud whistle went and it just became silent. I looked up seeing a tall figure on top of wooden table looking down on us. "Do not worry, we all must stay calm. The electricity will be up in no time. So come sit down we will light a few candles so we all can see" said the girl standing on top of this wooden table. Everyone just sat down and a girls that were beside the girl were lighting candles and placing it around the circle the girls had made, I could see the scared faces of these girls. I haven't felt scared since this had happened to me a lot since I went to a lot of different camps. The same girl rose from the shadows and stood in the middle of our circle and said "For those who may not know me I am Janine or as some of you call me "The Queen of The Camp" she had said

Author's Note

I'm not Done and thanks for the reviews THIS IS ROUGH please keep this in mind. Don't worry about grammar. I will need an editor please and thank you

Reviews

[LipglossKiller]

Very nice! I'd like to see where the rest of the story goes! I'm glad that the other girls were nice to Ina. I really want to know more about the queen of the camp.

Btw, you have a few run on sentences. Your one sentence "I felt calm and confident...knew someone was coming in." It might work better if it were two or three sentences. it would be a little easier to follow.

[snapstache]

I love it!
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