White Noise

One of my very first attempts at poetry.

White Noise

How very very

strange that

that’s what he

hears. The click

or the splutter

of the wheel in

the gutter, the

lock tumbler

turning the

washer churning.

But love falls on

deaf ears,

deaf eyes and a

deaf mind.

Reviews

[Confuser]

I loved it; if you didn't say it was your first poem, no way would I have quessed. Would still be continueing to find new meaning in the metaphors. I would say, please continue writing. You have a talents for poetry. Thank you.

[Chaston]

I like the simplicity. It flows like a mechanism. Cool and clean. Nice piece Ben.

[arejoleacher]

I can't really put what I want to say about this poem in words, it just makes me feel a overwhelming calm. I love it.

[BenKeane]

Thank you so much!