Secret

One man's internal struggle

Yet again I take that lonesome walk

With only my thoughts for friends

Knowing that I should turn and run

Knowing where this path ends

I think back to that phone call

Where you begged and swore and cried

You said you couldn't carry on

You said you wish you died

I knew that in being there

My heart would rip in two

But I couldn't leave you there alone

The door in the distance grew

I see the moonlight hit your face

The tears are glistening down

It must be nearly freezing

Yet you're solely in your gown

I come and sit beside you

No words are needed here

You simply fall into my arms

So glad to have me near

For I to you am your best friend

And yes I play my part

But for me, truly, madly and deeply

I love you with all my heart

Reviews

[Forgotten]

I found this poem very sweet, and it put a smile on my face. Every poem that stimulates an emotional response or for me reminded me of a similar instance in my life is a success in my eyes, great write, amazing potential, i look forwrd to reading more

[Arabdha]

really well written-one can feel every line !

[Amila Jay]

Great write:)

[hmm]

So emotional and ever so deep, Very well penned, it gripped me.

[Miss'LC]

This is really good,
The story it's self explains alot, and the flow of it, is just awesome,
God Job Benny, keep writing. :)x