Whispers

I heard the echo of a whisper

Gentle as the ocean breeze

A voice that spoke of courage

Endless love and perfect peace

Though they were but whispers

Those words thundered through my heart

And there, they sparked a riot

Setting fire to the dark

Author's Note

A short piece that I had hoped to work into something bigger, but never really found the right place for it.

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Love this. How powerful is even the echo of an inspiring whisper! This is uplifting and hopeful. Lovely. It needs no more (in reference to your note). :)

[barleygirl]

I really love this. It's very visual & full of feeling. It perfectly describes the way something beautiful can come to us in a whisper, but then as we find others who resonate with this feeling, it grows into a riotous enjoyment. Very imaginative & thought-provoking.