Some time in December

It was sometime in November when I started to get to know you but it was early September when we first laid eyes on each other. But it wasn’t soon after I knew I wanted to be with you.

It was early December when I could hear a sweet voice calling mine, but it wasn’t you. I whisper in my ear only they weren’t your words, a hand on mine but they weren’t your ridges, a kiss on my lips but I only dreamt that they we’re yours.

Soon the snow started to fall harder the wind danced threw the lifeless trees and the tears came stronger.

The whispers in my ear and the voice calling my name disappeared slowly just like the others.

You where there for my tears

You where there for my cheers

You tried to be there for my dears

You said it felt like years.

Author's Note

This short story is about when I first fell in love-
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Reviews

[Justin]

that was really good, it tells a great story in a short form :) :)

[Mia]

Thank, that's what I was trying to accomplish

[Justin]

your welcome, u did a great job of accomplishing it :)

[Mirko Galuši..]

Whoa, this one really packs a strong emotional punch. It gets more pumped up with feelings as it nears the culmination point, which just bursts and explodes with pure emotion. Well done :)

[Mia]

Thank you very much, that's what I was going for

[Arrow]

Wonderful writing. Even within the shortness of the story I feel I was there feeling everything you did. Really showing how you feel is an amazing gift you have.

[Mia]

Thank you so much I really appreciate it.

[BlueDreams]

Very nicely crafted this one! :) Deep & meaningful! Loved it :)

[Mia]

Thank you ( : Glad you liked it

[BlueDreams]

My pleasure :) Just Loved it :)