Hey, I like it just the way it is. It's short punchy verse sounds like a rapping incantation of reanimated Edgar Allen Poe taking a stab outside his cage at social injustice. Or perhaps personal injustice? At any rate, it's a bonny write. It could be a series that leads to a battle cry of freedom...at least, for the protagonist sake I truly hope so.
Not much to say here, apart from words can't express enough how much I like this poem. Good job. Have a nice day :)
Posted 6 Years Ago
6 Years Ago
I am SO glad that you like what I write! You even like the goofy ones. You have most definitely li.. read moreI am SO glad that you like what I write! You even like the goofy ones. You have most definitely lifted my spirits.