Chances

Take one!

How many times

Can one be broken?

Believing in a

Word spoken.

 

Love tossed so

Carelessly aside.

Taking me on

This endless ride.

 

Tormented soul who

Believe in romances.

No win situation

Without chances.

Reviews

[Paavana Varma]

Brevity is the soul of wit! Great job :)

[Robert]

Love how you have the rhyme in your poems (something I can't do). Its amazing how love is often tossed aside. But your right as well with you have to take those chances. There is someone waiting to be discovered.

[Nightfeather]

One's body and mind can be broken many times but thy soul shall never break. As long as there is hope left, one will recover from the torments that life brings us. I like your poem and I can see that you have talent. Its flow feels nice.

Good job :D

[A. Kim Spradling]

Thank you for your comment. I was... inspired.... I have begun writing recently and cannot stop.... Thank you again. It means so much.

[Nightfeather]

No problem. I am glad that I could inspire you. Good luck with your writing :)