Two Hearts

I am willing to take that step with you!

Two separate hearts

Hurt and bent.

Afraid and torn

Feelings spent.

 

A meeting.

Intense feeling.

Hide away.

Not dealing.

 

Anxious and hopeful

Both decide

To take the step.

Two hearts collide.

Reviews

[John Gifford]

The risk is also great, Well done

[A. Kim Spradling]

Thanks so much for your response, John!! I appreciate your comments. I am a teacher and not on here much until the summer. Please feel free to read the others and let me know your thoughts.

[Cody]

Now this is what I'm talking about. You get all the powerful impact in a short poem. You know how to handle it.

[A. Kim Spradling]

Cody, thank you so much for the comment. I am very fond of short poems and that is why I write them that way. Your comment means a lot!!!