I Feel You

Have you ever cared for someone so much that you could actually feel them? You will understand if you have.

It’s past midnight

When I wake.

Where is sleep?

No end or break.

 

The endless turn.

No release.

I feel the burn.

Will this cease?

 

Quietly, like a whisper,

Sensation anew.

I’m not alone

I feel you.

Reviews

[Ghost]

Such elegant words of longing written here.. You have such a way with writing, thank you for sharing..

[A. Kim Spradling]

Thank you again for your review, Ghost! I like explaining something BIG with few words. This is one of my older poems. I still love it though. Thank you again for enjoying my writing!

[Lluvs]

Wow so beautifully written I felt like this explains how you feel when you lose someone you love (: