Hands of Time ⏰️

These are the HANDS OF TIME,
being in a CERTAIN ERA, now
that would be SO DIVINE,
LIVING in the TIMES PAST,
would be JUST FINE!!

RELIVING a PAST DREAM,
that would only BE MINE,
OLD PAST MEMORIES that
are STORED DEEP in the
BACK of my MIND!!

In order to Visit them,
I SIMPLY TRAVEL THROUGH
IMAGINATIONS and
JUST UNWIND!!

My OLD, FONDEST MEMORIES that
have GONE FAR AWAY,
I shall never FORGET THEM,
and still think about them
THIS VERY DAY, but

The HAPPINESS they had,
has since then, GONE ASTRAY,
I SHALL NEVER, EVER
FORGET THEM, because
THOSE WERE THE DAYS,
They were THE BEST THAT
I HAVE EVER HAD, but
Things are DIFFERENT NOW, which
MAKES LIFE SEEM SO SAD!!

If I could only turn back,
the HANDS OF TIME,
It would be so nice,
TO REVISIT and
TO REMINISCE, and
NO I WOULDN'T THINK TWICE,

I WOULD GO, VISIT AND
STAY FOR A WHILE, AND
IT WOULD FEEL JUST FINE
IT WOULD BE A JOURNEY
THAT I WON'T FORGET,
IF I COULD TURN BACK
THE HANDS OF TIME!!!


B.R.
Date: 3/26/2025

Reviews

[Zombified Spider]

I love this poem so much! The lines
"The HAPPINESS they had,
has since then, GONE ASTRAY"
Really resonated with me.
(P.S. JayG is a real a*****e, seemed you handled that well. I absolutely love your style of poetry and recently used one of your poems in a school assignment for a poetry class.)

[Belle79]

Thank you so much and thank you for your response to my Poem. Your thoughts and concerns are APPRECIATIVE!!!

[Labella]

I relate deeply to this piece. “RELIVING a PAST DREAM,
that would only BE MINE,”
and
“If I could only turn back,
the HANDS OF TIME,”
are the lines that resonate with me the most. I really enjoy this poem!

[Belle79]

Thank you for commenting and reading 😊