Water Puddles

Water puddles from a heavy rain
Gray clouds above as they calmly remain,
The air is fresh, the temp is so cool,
No signs of sunshine or skies of blue

The Rain is Pouring from the clouds of gray
Splashing all over, what a Rainy day,
So, wear your Rain gear, coats and rubbers,
Please try to stay dry and avoid water puddles


B.R.
11/12/2024

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

Now I feel a little soggy. Very nice writing--I could see (and feel) it all. I loved stomping in water puddles when a kid, but now I avoid them. Even though you paint a grey scene, it doesn't seem sad at all, and even a bit happy.