Maze

You Got me running around like 

 I'm in a CARNIVAL MAZE,

 Looking all DISORIENTED, 

DISTRACTED and DAZED, 

I Don't know where to go, 

I'm not sure what to do, 

Keep running into these DEAD ENDS, 

I don't have the SLIGHTEST CLUE.

 I'm stuck in this MAD HOUSE, 

I need to find the WAY OUT, but

 If I stay on the RIGHT PATH, 

I'll find the CORRECT ROUTE!!! 

 B.R. 

Date: 03/24/2023

Reviews

[Vol]

Belle,
With illustrations, this would be a GREAT children's book!
Vol

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

what an apt similie for falling in love. going to the carnival is an unforgettable experience, just like love. and like love, there's a feeling that 'this can't be real!' the lights and sounds are overstimulating and the use of CAPS LOCK is actually quite appropriate. for me, love songs usually brings back memories of one person, but this one also took me back to years earlier where going to the Royal Show was the biggest event of the year.