Fog Part I (Emanate)

I've recently become the vocalist of a doom-metal band, and this are my first attempt at a set of lyrics for one of the songs. Enjoy! Feedback would be really helpful!

Choke my breathing, your suffocating, Cimmerian tenure.

 

Embrace me, your cold grip,

Encase me within your darkness,

Cascade upon me, no more light falls.

 

You roll up the hills in your undeniable nature,

Terrorising all that is in your path.

 

You have eminated from afar,

Scoured a great distance to find me.

And here I am, helpless to your beckoning.

 

Chase me through the dank streets of my mind,

Attempt to find that small glimpse of sanctity that I hold onto with all my might.

But it is not enough.

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[The old me]

great poem