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A Poem by BellaVita
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Rambling on.... Thoughts need to pour out so I can sleep.

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Uneasy, unstretched
Untethered thoughts roaming

Roaming thoughts
Roaming body
Lets sit at the bench and talk

Nonsense pours
All over it spills and spills
Spills the insides of her brains.

Beatify this
Slow it down
It is all nonsense to anyone reading
Including myself!

Words that shine
in dullness of structured chaos
They dance and show their chaotic messiness
Chaotic creativity
Is the mind when it's sleepy
But this is something that she isn't certain is even reasonably creative
So, agreement is not.

© 2013 BellaVita


Author's Note

BellaVita
just, this is spilling of nonsensical thoughts before sleeping

It doesn't make sense.

Enjoy. Hahaha

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I can relate to this piece.
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lovely writing - keep it up!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I did enjoy it. I am laughing right now, and I hope that was your purpose. It was creative, and the outpouring of your thoughts a little messy, as you said, but still structured, and still poetic. I enjoyed it quite a bit.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on December 7, 2013
Last Updated on December 7, 2013
Tags: hypomania, bipolar, poem, nonsense, need, friends, sleep

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BellaVita
BellaVita

Miami, FL



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