Thoughtswoooooosh

Thoughtswoooooosh

A Poem by BellaVita
"

I can't sleep.

"
She say there, cold, tired, endless frustration endless wondering endless.....it's all endless....in the wild her thoughts bounce and roam risking thoughts in unknown territory - the structure of it all amazed her - senses endlessly amused.

Diving in she forces herself
She must do this do something must get it all out or her brain will forever be running
No rhymes nothing it's all nonsense
No one else to listen but this plain white paper.

Uncomfortable, slight tension in lower stomach
All is fair in....no, life is not fair
But life is beautiful.

Wondering along the endless trails of trails of walls surrounding
Peering over and around but forever in a labryth
Her mind is a puzzle of which the pieces
Are unfit to fit

Oooooh when are you going to answer?
No one, no one is there to answer
She sulks.
She lives.
She lives on.

© 2013 BellaVita


Author's Note

BellaVita
just jotting thoughts down to try to sleep

maybe slight hypomania

Maybe slight insane

Nevertheless, too much on my mind....

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Oh my God! And again, the outpouring of your thoughts seem chaotic, a little messy, but at the same time, still connected, and still enjoyable. I am laughing again. Thanks. I hope that was your purpose. A little humor, a little levity to lighten the load of your thoughts that keep you awake? Either way, I enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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BellaVita
BellaVita

Miami, FL



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A Poem by BellaVita