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Any ideas for a title??

Every night, I lay awake,

Thinking of you.

The memories of the two of us together swarm in my head.

No matter how hard I try, I can’t let go.

I can’t get over you.

I know you didn’t mean to hurt me so,

But you did.

I’m willing to move on, though,

And forget about that all,

If you’ll just come back to me.

All I want is to hold you in my arms.

To hear you whisper in my ear,

Things like “I love you.”,

And “It’s all okay.”

But, you’ve already moved on.

Now, I can’t sleep at night,

Knowing that someone else gets to wake up every morning,

Next to you.

And that I get to wake up, alone and heartbroken.

Author's Note

PLease telll me what you think? I didn't edit this yet, I was kinda in a hurry, but hopefully I'll edit it soon. So, please tell me your honest opinion? Thanks for reading! <3

Reviews

[Dream Slave]

Sad... disappointing... angry... but willing to forget just for another chance. Love is like that but always have to make sure you are loved back or if not it won't work and even then it takes more than loving someone to make it work. Very nice how it flowed along and told the situation. Very skilled.

[kaylynnmelody♥]

I've been there, thanks for sharing. I think a lot of people can relate to this poem. I love the punctuation, it was precise and well thought-out. Thanks for sharing this! Keep writing, you have a skill for writing. -KaylynnMelody♥

[Samantha]

Very sad but well written. It struck a chord with me (mainly because i've been there) so its very emotional in each word. I liked it.

[Jane Doe]

Wake up heart broken is what i'd call it
I love it thoug
-lil sis

[hmm]

Heartfelt and sad write. Very well written and expressed!

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

incredible work. i feel liike this often..

[Short.Nerd]

Very nice job (: A bit sad though.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

wow...very sad...
"Things like “I love you.”,

And “It’s all okay.”" I think everyone that had relationship would hate to listen to that words because sometimes the one who spoken those words usually hide something in the heart....

[Caitlynxoxo]

I really liked this; i could feel the hurt the person was going through, how badly they wanted their love back and desprate they were :) Personally, i think that you should name this something like "I can't sleep at night" because that was a line repeated a couple of times in this poem. Just a suggestion though!!!! Whatever you name it will be awesome!

xoxo Caitlyn xoxo

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad poem of love and disappointment. Waiting make the pain increase. I wished I could I could take words back and go back in time to repair mistakes made. A broken heart need time and new dreams to be rebirth. A very good poem.
Coyote