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Ehhh.... :/

I remember that day, back in September.
I remember the way you looked at me.

Really saw me.

You wouldn’t take your eyes off me.

You finally got up the courage and asked me out.

I was so happy.

You were too.

 

Then, only weeks later, we had our first fight.

I slammed the door on your face and locked you out.

You told me you wouldn’t let me go.

That you loved me too much to stay mad.

We made up, and never thought about it again.

 

The months passed, and we both grew up.

New year’s passed, and we were still together.

 

But that was when something changed.

When we talked, you weren’t as sweet as you used to be.

You always seemed angry about something.

At first, I thought it was nothing.

A few weeks went by, with you like that.

And then it got worse.

If I went to leave, you would always grab my arm tighter than you should.

You were aggressive.

But, I still thought nothing about it.

I thought you loved me and I loved you.

 

After that, it only got worse.

If I’d say something you didn’t like, you’d take it out on me.
You’d beat me, slap me, kick me.

You’d do anything to see me hurt.

I’d wake up the next day with more bruises than I could count.

 

I knew it had to stop, but what could I do?

If I tried to leave, you’d only beat me harder.

 

But, late one night, when you were asleep,

I snuck out the window, and ran away.

I never looked back.

Not even once.

Author's Note

I don't like this very much, but please tell me what you think(: Thanks for reading!<3

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a sad poem. I know how some guys are with girls. I hate how girls get hurt or everything because a guy was angry. The guy should take there anger out on a punching bag not a girl. I am glad that the girl left and never looked back. I don't like when girls get bruised by guys. I know it's wrong for a girl to hit a guy too..but it is abuse and no one likes that....well sad write, but good. Thanks for sharing. :()

[yoyob]

good i like it but i dont like men hiitin wemen

[r]

Wow... This gave me cold chills, seriously. And that's a good thing, trust me. This is an amazing poem, i love it. it's so sad, and wow... I love the ending, the last stanza... beautiful, and glad that she got away.

[al25]

I'm sorry you had to go through this. Great work. :)

[Jane Doe]

p.s bella u know right now if this is tru i'd fly out to where u live n beat BBEEEEP outta that guy even if it wasnt u he was actually hittin on i'd kick him nvm

[Jane Doe]

i like it dont dooubnt its a milimeter away from acting like the b word:P
i do likie tho n alsooooooooooo i tink u should name it fast forward bcuzz in the poem after they left u aint looked back on their sorryyyy BUTT