Perfect For Each Other?

You said it today.

You told me everything.

How you’d been trying your hardest to keep your feelings in since you met me.

You told me how you lay awake at night, thinking of me.

You told me the words you’ve been meaning to say for almost a lifetime.

You told me you loved me.

 

I told you today.

I told you how I felt.

How I’d been trying to tell you something for days, but every time I tried, something else came happened.

I told you what’s been bother me for days.

I told you I loved you.

 

And, now as I sit here, you’d think everything would be perfect.

You’d think I’d have the guy of my dreams.

But I don’t.

You’d think I’d be happy.

But I’m not.

 

I’ve been waiting 6 years for you to tell me.

But something seems wrong.

I thought we were perfect for each other.

We spent so much time together, as friends.

We did everything together.

You were always the first person I called if something was wrong.

You were always the first person to visit if I was sick.

 

I really thought we were going to be perfect together.

But I guess I was wrong.

 

Author's Note

Please tell me what you think (be honest!!) Thanks for reading(:

Reviews

[Poetry Girl]

its a really good poem and i like the meaning of it. its so true because not everything is what you think it is. its like "you dont know what you have til its gone". you can never tell until you've lived it.

[?]

I just love this. This is a wonderful true life poem. Been there too.
I really enjoyed reading this.
Thanks for sharing

[Jocelin]

I love it :)

[al25]

I enojyed reading it. I like how this is a poem but telling a story. Good job.

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

wow, really good, nice wording, and a great build up for the end

[Short.Nerd]

I have to agree with Cheezit.. I loved the last line. Sounds very true to something a lot of people go through in life.

[r]

oh WOW. I've had the same problems...or at least the same feelings... My heart hurts when i read this, remembering...

But, anyway! I love it. The emotion is in there, and i love the last lines.

"I really though we were going to be perfect
together
but i guess i was wrong"

XD amazing

[Patricia(:]

Omg, this poem is amazing! I know I've said this many times before, but it's AMAZING! God your poems are so deep, and just heartfelt. It's as if you take the reader into a whole new world! This is just beautiful, I truly love this poem. Such marvelous work my dear, keep it up. Bravo!

[Ian Faraway]

Loved it, couldn't relate to it in general but I could on some levels. Keep it up!

[Liz-z]

"But something seems wrong.
I thought we were perfect for each other.
We spent so much time together, as friends.
We did everything together."
Loved how a love so right went so wrong, it was an amazing poem with an amazing meaning, fantastic really.
"I really thought we were going to be perfect together.
But I guess I was wrong"
I guess after you got it, you knew it was too late, or just too wrong... perfect poem. I absolutely loved it!
Thank you so very much for sharing! :)