In The End

In The End

A Poem by Closed Account
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a new poem i wrote this morning while hoping that i hadn't totally screwed things up with my friend, and hoping that we might be able to get through this summer. I hope you guys like it! =D

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In the end,

I hope we're still together,

maybe even for forever,

but i don't know.

In the end,

maybe we'll apart again,

just like we started,

but who knows?

But if we're together,

I'll thank my lucky stars,

for letting me stay with you.

No matter how far apart we are,

I think we can make it through.

But in the end,

it all comes down to you.

Do you feel it too?

© 2009 Closed Account


Author's Note

Closed Account
i would really appreciate feedback, so please review and tell me what you think. thanks! =D

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The idea of this is very strong and very heartfelt
I'm not sure why but it was kinda hard to read at some points.
But still the idea of this is very good. And I love it.
Its very relateable. I hope that everything works out
between you and your friend. I'm pretty sure it will.
Great job!


Posted 15 Years Ago


It really shows how much you appreciate your best friend.

Posted 15 Years Ago


great poem that I think a lot of people can relate to, me included :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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