Just Okay

I knew the day left I you, that until I was in your arms again, all i would ever be is okay.

I looked out the window wishing you were standing there ready to comfort me.
Even though I no its impossible you�re a thousand miles away, but I can still feel your heart beating with mine.
Im sitting here in my land of dreams hoping you will be here.
No luck.
I know you don�t know how i feel about you even though you might feel the same way.
Or maybe you do no who I feel and are to afraid to tell me how you feel.
I wont know till I ask, and I cant ask till I see you, hug you kiss you.
I know it will be the best day of my life.
I remeber the last time I saw you, you told me everything will be ok, that I will be ok.
you were right i am okay but thats all i am.
im not happy, loved, comforted, im okay.
and until the day im in your arms again thats all i'll ever be is Just Okay.

Reviews

[larryb]

Nicely done, when you write from the heart you can never go wrong :)

[Brenda Sue]

Very well written. Great poem.

[Erin Phoenix]

Welcome to Writers Cafe!

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Keep me posted.

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Your work is lovely. I enjoyed reading it.

[Ryan D. Mosley]

This was great! Wonderful job conveying your emotions to me in this work. You wish so greatly to be loved, bu yet you receive nothing and therefore feel nothing but "okay". Overall: Good Job!