9am

I wrote this at McDonalds..

It's all something that I want to dip my toes into;
but no not right now,
I'm up wayy too high to want to bring this down.
One day you'll see I'll dirty my knees
upon the ground you walk and read,
gonna do what I want and break all these bonds.
Living one day at a time,
this feeling wraps me up and keeps the warmth.
My quench of thirst for you is dark, deep, and persistent.
I'm gonna live this life right, my walkway of golden smiles and dirt.

Author's Note

Judge not harshly.

Reviews

[armadillo]

edited poem: It's something I want to dip my toes into;
but not right now,
I'm up high, want this down.
One stumble, I will
dirty my knees
upon the ground
you walk
gonna do what I want and break all these bonds.
Living one day at a time,
this feeling wraps me up and keeps me warm.

My quench of thirst for you is dark, deep, persistent.
black waters spluttering back
The colour of you heart is
Chicken nuggets?

F**k them.

[armadillo]

think i have to post it :(

[armadillo]

i have a review bella

[armadillo]

I really like this Bella- well written and a very tight poem- no waffle which is great. and I love '... walkway of golden smiles and dirt.'