Listen to the wind

Based off the book called Listen to the rain

Listen to the Wind

 The softness of the wind

 The swift soft swerve

 The still singing sting

 Of the wind

 Listen to the Wind

 the rustle of the wind

 The rustle tustle hustle

 The swaying styling steering

 Of the wind

 List to the wind

 The loudness of the wind

 The furious, ferocious, feircness,

 The roaring, poring, storing

 Of the wind

Listen to the stillness

 The quiet tinkle wrinkle

 Of after-wind

 Skiddle diddle riddle

 Of no wind

Author's Note

Enjoy! Keep negative comments to yourself please! Thank you!

Reviews

[Liliana Wolfsong]

I love the use of alliteration in this piece. Very beautiful! Makes me feel a little more calm.

[RichGee]

Lovely rhythmical piece...An enjoyable refreshing write.
Just one thing...I believe that fierceness is misspelled in the 3rd sentence of the 3rd stanza.

[Penny]

The poem just flows like the wind, very lyrical. Well done

[Mind Racer]

That was GREAT! Loved the characterization of it! I love wind so much, it makes me happy to feel a soft breeze, it's the best part of outside. Keep up the good work!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Made me desire to read the book. I like how you used the wind to create question and mystery. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[annabellee]

What a lovey poem. I love how you brought the sound of the wind alive in your poem.
Well done :)

[oscardelamarca]

Sarabelle, my comments are not negative, I like writing and I really congratulate you friend greetings