Little Miss Mischief

My frwend

She's quiet when you first meet her
Her eyes cast down and her mouth firmly shut
But if she warms to you
And ONLY if
She will sudddenly be a ray of sunshine

She's hilarious once you get to know her
Her eyes sparkle and her mouth forever yabbering
But if you wound her
And ONLY if
She will suddenly be a bolt of lightning

She's a wonderus friend if she accepts you
Her eyes are friendly and her mouth complimentary
But if your soul is weak
And ONLY if
She'll try to whip it back into shape

She's a hard worker at school and at home
Her eyes are determined and her mouth set
But if she takes a blow
And ONLY if
She'll be temporarily out of play

She's my bestest friend because she's a ray of sunshine
Her heart is witty and her soul is good
But if she leaves me
And ONLY if
My soul will weaken more

Author's Note

I hope it makes sense.

Reviews

[Lamia]

Thats nice, it's funny how it's about my sister are you sure you've got that right. this is mischeif typing for Limia but Limia's still aying all these things.

[mischeif]

It's such a nice poem that I find it hard to believe it's about me=-)

[Bella-Marie]

well i did

[Bella-Marie]

hey did you watch seven days
?

[Havatara]

Aww that's so nice! Only really good friends would write that about each other =)
Anyway, wonderus is spelt wondrous and bestest isn't a word. Other than that it was fantastic.

[Liza]

it made so much sense to me; i have similarities to the person you describe and i like the flow to the stanzes
it's beautiful the way you describe

[mischeif]

Oh that's sweet.(choke) I can't believe I just said that.
nicely written. What dose it mean temporarily out of play?