An Even Horror Story

The paragraphing and such is horrific, but I am obsessed with even numbers and this was a good way for me to write... Warning has violence!

Of course,

I didn't

want us

to end

this way.

Yes, we

once loved

each other.

But his

drinking and

my infidelity

changed all

of that.

One night,

whilst he

was watching

the sports

channel with

a beer

in one

hand, my

lover came

to our

house and

declared his

everlasting love

for me.

My husband

was mortified

and ordered

me out

of the

house like

a dog.

I was

not pleased.

I had

paid good

money for

that house!

I stayed

with my

lover, and

there I

hatched a

cunning plan.

It was

daringly simple,

and yet

he would

never had

seen it 

coming, as

I am 

a very

calm person...

When I

crept into

the house,

armed with

a cleaver,

he was

sitting with

his beer

at the

telly, watching

the Sport.

When I

stabbed him

in the

back, he

didn't scream

with pain

like I 

wanted him

to, and

so I 

stabbed him

once again.

Then he

began to

gurgle and

shriek in

a most

satisfying way.

I gave

my husband

a quick

peck before

I slit

his throat.

Me and

my lover

fled to 

Ireland, where

we changed

our names

and got 

on with 

a happy

new life.

Until I

found lovely

Johnny at 

work, and

my lover

found the

Poker machines...

But that 

is another

story, but

I think 

you can 

guess how

it goes.

Author's Note

PLEASE excuse me from the paragraphing and the setting out! It's terrible, but I like it.

Reviews

[Havatara]

Yeah, the paragraphing was a little hard to read, but I got the hang of it. Eventually. The only part I didn't like is that you said: 'he would never had seen it coming,' when it makes better sense to me to put: 'he never would have seen it coming' or 'he would have never seen it coming.' Either way, it's your piece, and it's fantastically gory as it is.

[mischeif]

Hahahaha. I love it. It was Fantastic

[Alyssa Boyd]

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[Michael X]

can you please write a continuation, because Im really curious to
see where you are taking this, lovers on the run Wow, what a plot!
i mean, how graphic and conceptualized. awsome job.

[Iris Jayne]

the colors sure did a good way of keeping my eyes glued to the screen. it started out quite peacefully, then suddenly the hair on the back of my neck stood as she kills him. the end also brings the echo of yet another suspense, and the whole poem/story spoke of an entire, horrifying, yet mysterious personality. great job.