Space and Pain

I like this poem, even if the title is offputting

I'm flying through space
I'm landing on the moon
I'm pushing through comments
I'll be with you soon

I'll sleep on a bed of thorns
I'll stab myself with pins
I'll starve myself for days
I'm wanting just to win

I'm laughing at sunset with you
I'm happy I went through pain
I'm happy I braved outerspace
TO BE WITH YOU AGAIN!

Author's Note

I know it's a bit weird and not my best, but can you forgive me???

Reviews

[Havatara]

Yes I can forgive you, because it's great. Kinda confusing at first, but still great.

[mischeif]

Hahahaha. You really are the romantic type. Great poem and flick yourself with a rubber band for that Author's note the poem was great. It flowed very smoothly and I couldn't right that

[Liza]

nothing to forgive; it flowed smoothly and the author took us step by step; methodically through various emotions, physical pains of time and space.