Crazee poeme

Crazee poeme

A Poem by Bella-Marie
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Uses words for the creative poetry thing

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She looks upon him with secret devotion
But he does not see any innuendos
So she inscribes her feelings
And the story is riveting!
It's about her Asperger's Syndrome
And how she's always mischief



© 2010 Bella-Marie


Author's Note

Bella-Marie
http://www.writerscafe.org/groups/Creative-Poetry/3025/forum/11277/

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i enjoyed the mysterious undertones kept from the subject.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh, I get it. It's a short poem with meaning in it.

Although, I must say, feel free to correct me, but why the mischief at the bottom. I don't understand.

All the rest is cute and a little funny.

Other than that little confusion there, I think it's an excellent poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


That better not b or else your dead me ( meancing, threat voice)

Over all great bit of writing. Short and simple

Posted 14 Years Ago


ha! short in sweet are always the best!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Bella-Marie
Bella-Marie

Hamilton, Waikato, New Zealand



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