Knitting

Knitting

A Poem by Bella-Marie
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Depressing but hilarious.

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Crying.
Screaming in agony.
Pain cutting into my brain, my flesh, my soul.
Life hanging my a piece of thread.
Scissors looming.

A snip.
A tiny snip.
And my whole life falls.
Downwards, falling.
Unravelling at the seams.

Silence.

© 2010 Bella-Marie


Author's Note

Bella-Marie
For linda.

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I kind of get it, if the you mean to say in the first few lines about absolute pain and then the sciscors represent some kind of tool. I'm getting the impression of suicide. Now, I might be wrong, but if so, I like it, but if not, then huh????? Lol, n'ways, good job, though.

Posted 14 Years Ago


'HUH???????????????????????"

Posted 14 Years Ago


I thought it was cute. I'm not entirely sure what you're trying to SAY with it, if you're even trying to say something, but it had a great rhythm and I loved it.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on March 25, 2010
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Bella-Marie
Bella-Marie

Hamilton, Waikato, New Zealand



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