He is all Mine

Written for... uh...

Hair of gold

Eyes of wonder

 

Intriguing voice

Smile of joy

 

A face so perfect

Looking at me

Lips saying...

 

My name

I’ll never let him go

Never

Ever

 

He is all mine

Author's Note

Uh... um... is it... a good... poem??? Did you get the acrostic bit?

Reviews

[mischeif]

thats very clever very well writen

[Poet's World]

simple and lovely poem with short lines, well penned....
enjoyed reading your poem.....

[Lilly]

oh wow - very clever with the acrostic bit - very sweet poem too. :)

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Well Done!!!

[nunldon]

I'll have to look up acrostic but I like your style. I love this kind of rhyming; subtle. Seems chock full of rhymes but it's difficult to place where. Terrific.
Oh, I keep a dictionary with me and no I didn't notice the "he is all mine"; I don't, usually, rate (compared to what?) but you get bonus points. Where do those ratings show up anyhow?
a hundred, either way.

[Taylor H.]

I liked it. The spacing made me feel like I needed to pause more, which through off the rhythm. But other than that, this is a good poem