Observationist

Observationist

A Poem by Bella-Marie
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Is it good? All true!

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Blondie's got his pants half-down

The red-head girl's got sunburn

Brunette is quiet, hard-working

Guy with slick fringe has all the answers

The posh white kid's got acne

One girl's got dyed hair

F**k is mentioned twice a minute

S**t is mentioned double that

Noise fills the room too the brim

One kid has got a constant surprised look

The dyed-hair girl has got her pink phone out

Oh no!

Teacher's coming, slip it away

This class is quieter than the last

But not by much

All the girls have tiny school skirts

 

Sigh.

 

If I was teacher, the red stuff would change...

But I am small, unnoticable, unlike Teacher.

I see things teacher doesn't.

He relys on me.

I'm his...

Observationist.

© 2009 Bella-Marie


Author's Note

Bella-Marie
Actually, I'm his Daughter, haha!

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Hum/ interesting

Posted 14 Years Ago


I'm sorry, I'm kind of confused in this poem. Is your dad the teacher and you tell him all of the things that happen in the class that aren't following the school rules? Other than that it was good.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 12, 2009

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Bella-Marie
Bella-Marie

Hamilton, Waikato, New Zealand



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