Full Circle

A full circle

Knife!

I see it lunge

Knife!

I see it plunge

 

Plunge!

Into my heart

Plunge!

right to the start

 

Start!

Of life, pain, death

Start!

Of out-of-breath

 

Breath!

It's hard to find

Breath!

It's not being kind

 

Kind...

Of happy, of sad

Kind...

Of angry, of mad

 

Mad!

I have found my strife

Mad!

The weapon... t'was a KNIFE!

Reviews

[mischeif]

haha the knife man your poems get better and better

[victoriamaggie]

its really neat, i love it
(especially as its about a knife)
i love the rhyming, and i reckon it all fits in nicely.
i just dont get the bit about 'of happy'
how can a knife be happy?
or has it killed someone???
i dunno, im confused right now, got hardly any brains.

[Madness is Insanity]

oooh, I like it. good effort, clever how you manage to make it work with the last word of the paragraph as the single word in the next. It really flows, Bella.