Red

What describes red?

Through the window

I see

a sunset

Red as lava

Red as hate

Red as blood

I look around

My room

Bathed in red

My empty visitors chair

I'm cold

Lonely

Sick

Dying

Strength leaves me

As red

Surrounds me

Red as...

Red as death.

Author's Note

Sad. I'm trying to write more poems to balance my writing ability, smiles!

Reviews

[mischeif]

Amazing. Very descriptive I really enjoyed it

[L.I. Black]

Wow...
Really just wow.
First of all I love the free flow of it. It works well with this kind of subject. Also the one word descriptions bring a lot to this. Keep writing like this and I'm sure you'll balance out just fine : 3