Sadness is a sin

Gravity pushing

Pushing me ever closer

Closer to my death

 

I hold on for life

But life is not what I want

I don't want to live

 

The heavens open

Rain pours down my tear-streaked face

My grip slowly slips

 

I let the cliff go

I let the hard ground hit me

I fall to my death

Author's Note

erm... sad?

Reviews

[mischeif]

Well written and a good use of words =-)

[Andrew'sWonderland]

Definitely depressing, but either way well written!! I loved the imagery! Great Job!

[Lunar Pup]

Simple but well written It is sad but it could hold more emotion within the writing... The imagery was beautiful though.