Darkness, shadow

ohhhhh....

The darkness enveloped the sunlight, and soon the warmth was gone, chased by the snakes of cruel cold. I shivered, not sure if it was the chill of the night penetrating me... or something else.

 

Walking through the quiet streets, a dog howls, and in answer, a whisper is carried by the wind to the hound - whispers of pain and suffering.

 

I begin to run, feeling a stare upon me. My blood freezes in my veins as a reach an empty house at the end of the street.

Then, something smells my fear. I stiffen, and a hand touches me. Falling to the ground with terror, all I can see is an engulfing black, all I can smell is a sour reek, all I can hear is "Yes... you're next."

Author's Note

Is it scary???

Reviews

[victoriamaggie]

really good bella!
its a bit cliche, but apart from that its really cool!

[me, myself and brenton]

i kinda want to know more about this poem thing its a bit wierd but i do like it