The First

My first venture into creative writting it was the first of many that helped me to reach a point of healing in my life.

Washing over me, Swirling round and drowning me
Cuts so deep wondering if they'll ever heal,
If only to leave a scar the daily reminder of the pain.
Will the dreams I dream ever come true ?
Or will I be left alone forever a ghost of my potential
bled to death of tears, to be numb to all things that
bring joy and pain lost in a fitful exsistance,
Never to know who I could've been.

Reviews

[Jess Holden]

very dark, love it

[Yani De Los Reyes]

Wow, this is some poem. It is like your heart is healing and yet you are still sad. But the poems is quite confusing because there are many interpretations. I would recommend that you put less of those different interpretations because that ruins the poem but it was good though. I can feel the tone of it. Good job!
Keep up the good work!


-Yani

[Nick Reynolds]

I love realistic, sad stories of healing and yet simultaneous sadness. Now i must apologize to begin with if that was not your poetic intention, but that is what i gleaned from this. :) and what id poetry without way too many different interpretations. :P thank you for sharing
Keep up the Writing!