Alexandria Jones

Just a little poem for my best friend ^-^

You've been the one that sees right through me.

The one I can always rely on.

Depend on.

You've been the one whose helped me through my life's mysteries.

You are the most majestic of songs.

Beautiful.

Creative.

Amazing.

You've been the only one to really love me for me.

I love you as if you were my flesh and blood.

My sister.

When my world seems grim,

and my days seem to be blackened by Pain's cloud,

You've given me an open hand.

Loving.

Warm.

Selfless.

You've given me so much more than I deserve. 

You're a blessing in the form of an angel  pure at heart.

I love you,

I really do.

I would do anything for you.

Take a hit from a bullet.

Get struck by a truck.

I would give you my life, If it meant for you to live.

You've been the one that sees right through me.

The one I can always rely on.

Depend on.

You've been the one whose helped me through my life's mysteries.

You are the most majestic of songs.

Beautiful.

Creative.

Amazing.

You've been the only one to really love me for me.

Which is why, you will always remain to me,

as my best friend.

Reviews

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

Now, this is really good. I love the honesty, the style, the way you organized the rhythm an lines. My only suggestion (not that it's really needed) would be a blank line here and there; just to let the reader catch their breath. Very good. Keep going brave explorer... your journey has just begun.

[Bell-lala]

Hey, Thank you so much for the review! :) I appreciate it. i will definatly use the blank line here and there. You helped me so much ^-^ thanks

[JRB]

Great write towards friendship,
Now to find that in a love that's truely a friendship to love,,,,,,

[Bell-lala]

Thank you ^-^

[LetMeLoveYou]

;_; that was beautiful. i loved how it flowed and the way it was written. It really touched me and brought beautiful happy tears to my eyes. Just a beautiful poem all around. :)

[Bell-lala]

Thank you so much ^-^