And I Know...

And I Know...

A Poem by Bee135
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okay, so i thought of this while out walking today...

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I know that I love you,
I know that my love is true, 
I know that you hate me, 
And I know that we were never meant to be.

I know that I will love you forever,
I know that we will never be together,
I know that you hate me, 
And I know that we were never meant to be.

I know that I will try to move on,
I know that you will never truly be gone,
I know that you hate me, 
And I know that we were never meant to be.

I know that I will try to forget,
I know that I will always be upset,
I know that you hate me,
And I know that we were never meant to be.

I know...
that you hate me...
I know...
that we were never...
meant to be...

© 2010 Bee135


Author's Note

Bee135
please ignore grammar mistakes, and for the last bit the '...' means pause when you read it.

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I love this. I and many other people can relate to this alot. The repitition in the stanzas is great, tells the reader what you were trying to get across and the ending gives it the perfect closure. Great Job, thankyou for sharing :) 10/10

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow... I can surely relate to this. Not many people get into a mixed up love situation. Very nice..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow I love the pull of this poem. The fact that you kept repeating the last two lines drove the point home more.
It is such a horrible feeling to be in love with someone and know that it is all one sided.
Great write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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