Operation Suicide

Hide those pills, they're much too strong

I know you've held on for far too long

 

Those razors they cut deep, steel on skin

It's your idea of a perfect sin

 

The building so tall, must have patience to jump

Since now your heart is down far in a slump

 

Now, finger on the trigger,  a gun to your head

And all you beg for is for the chance to be dead

 

Water so clear and water so deep

Underwater is where your breath is to keep

 

Tilting the bottle back, you continue to drink

Intoxication, poisoning, it's right at the brink

 

Gallows hang from your ceiling, a rope in disguise

And it's calling to you with it's pretty little lies

 

Wrists bleeding on the floor, empty bottle of cyanide

This was a test: It's name? Operation Suicide

Author's Note

Don't worry about me. I'm actually quite fine. Just wanted something dark out on the plate.

Reviews

[Laura Storm]

I love it. It has fantastic rhyming and flow.

[symmetryAsymmetry]

hurting oneself can be addictive...suicide an obsession...
I'm glad I never gave in...
but I can relate to what you've written...it is really good.

[jennifer little]

nice poetry keep it up

[Silent Knight]

beautiful write. And I don't sound that British >.>...

[Pi Cee]

"Those razors they cut deep, steel on skin
it's your idea of a perfect sin"

Yep. I like the situations.....

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I loved this write. I liked the darkness in this. It was very nicely written. I loved the rhythm and flow of the piece. I am adding this to my favorites. Thanks for sharing.

[Distant horizons]

Yeah, we can all jump to the wrong conclusions at times. so now thats out the way i can say that this is delisciously dark and well thought out. the end line is perfext too.
ps...glad you are quite fine :)