My Puzzle Piece

My Puzzle Piece

A Poem by Miss Marie Riorden.
"

Fill in this empty hole, come and finish me.

"

My puzzle piece, my puzzle piece

Oh where have you gone?

You've found a better fit for you

At the star of dawn

 

My puzzle piece, my puzzle piece

Will you ever be found

Everything is there almost

Pieces left on the ground

 

My puzzle piece, my puzzle piece

Fill in the missing spot

Please come and find me

You're the only hope I got

 

My puzzle piece, my puzzle piece

Oh how I hate you so

Running away from me like you do

As fearful as a doe

 

My puzzle piece, my puzzle piece

Could you ever let it be?

Fill in this empty hole

Come and finish me.

© 2012 Miss Marie Riorden.


Author's Note

Miss Marie Riorden.
I really wish I could find that piece of me that's missing...

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Puzzle pieces are always lost, you lose a one here, maybe two there. Growing up and away from the new package covering. But keep in mind what the whole puzzle looked like that first time...and you know who you are.
Fantastic write, I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this. Is reads well and it is such a relatable topic for all of us at some point.
p.s. I wish you luck in finding your missing piece!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so well written with a great flow to it. maybe we all have a piece missing and the puzzle is in finding not only what it is but what it's for and why we long for it so much. Really enjoyed this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awwwwwww...this is sad...I sowwy Marie :'c I know you'll find that someone someday tho...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was an amazing piece. I really enjoyed this one. I know how you feel though. Everyone eventually will feel this way. I know I have. So I can relate to this piece. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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