I Will Not Bow

I Will Not Bow

A Chapter by Miss Marie Riorden.
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"I will not bow, I will not break." - Breaking Benjamin

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Independent

 

Watered down feelings, shoving you down

Irreplaceable trust, broken by you

Loving me, it wasn't ever to be so

Loving you, it was something I did true

 

Nothing could compare, to the way you made me feel

Only you, and I promise only you, made this feel real

Too bad it all fell, it was fake, my heart you did steal


Breaking down everything, I'd strived to see for so long

Obvious is what I should have seen, only I was too naïve

Wondering why, it even happened at all



© 2011 Miss Marie Riorden.


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Getting your heart broken is always a terrible feeling. I know how you feel in this write. I can relate to it which is a good thing. Thanks for sharing.

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