Broken Will.

Sorrow encases the broken, the girl who lost her will

Who finally stopping trying, letting choking tears spill

The laugh, the smile, the act was just drilled

Something that has caused the soul to finally be killed

She couldn't try anymore, she lost the spirit of herself

It's thrown away with her heart, on the beaten, dusty shelf

So shredded and shattered into pieces, it's past any recognition

The blood flows from her pain,  flesh giving her permission

Faster, faster, red pours from the once pale skin

Day by breaking day, the veil grows thin

Façade breaks apart, leaving tears of hopeless effort

Shattered in the reflection of the mirror,  sanity finally left her

There's nothing left to be, nor will there ever exist

Then a broken girl who tried, killing by the razor kissed

Upon the veins of her very heart, gave up to soon

Traded her life to stop the suffering, rising up above the moon

Author's Note

Even the strongest person breaks......

Reviews

[Lemontine]

Wow. I loved this. The emotion it was just amazing.

[J Todd Underhill]

Everyone breaks from time to time, it's how you pick yourself up and continue on afterward is what defines the person you are dealing with. well done, with dome decent rhyming and a good flow.

[Savior knowmore]

Your friends are willing to help put you back together, though it may take a long time....

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And the stronger you are the harder it is to pick yourself back up when you break...