Love's Poison

Love's Poison

A Poem by Miss Marie Riorden.
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Drip, drip, drip. I hate school.

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I'm falling, I'm choking

I can't seem to breathe!

Help me, help me!

Please, oh please don't leave!

 

I won't mess up again

I promise you, I do

You're the most important

But you don't think that's true

 

You wouldn't even hear me out

See, I guess this is a lie

No matter how many times I try

All you do is make me cry

 

I can't take another hit

You're just pulling me down

But, oh how I need you

Despite the ugliness behind the gown

 

I'm trying my best

Can't you see it's just for you?

I wouldn't give anyone else this grace

I don't want this to be all over and through

 

I'm dropping, I'm hurting

I'm slowly dying inside my heart

And now I won't show you

How much this is tearing me apart

 

Just stay with me, forever and always

I promise to be picture perfect

Just for you my love

For your love's poison had that effect

© 2011 Miss Marie Riorden.


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very nice :o

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was amazing. I can relate to this piece as well. Everyone can because people can get poisoned by love. Excellent write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow...truly amazing...You can't really imagine how much I can relate with this one !

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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