I'm Hungry...

I'm Hungry...

A Poem by Miss Marie Riorden.
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Yeah. . . Hey Jodie, what do you think?

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That familiar feeling from the bottom of the pit

Yet another day, yet another fit

Obsessive compulsive disorder, wouldn't it quit?

I don't think this would make this poem legit

 

I'm only writing for passion and irritation

I think I'm suffering from this, starvation

Yet another day, hunger is temptation

My stomach making noises in empty contemplation

 

Suffering more and more, it seems so bad

Not another meal that's yet to be had

Go further and further, making me mad

I won't eat a bit, my stomach is sad

 

It complains and screams, telling me to eat

But I won't drop down, and accept defeat

I can't help myself to a morsel, or a stupid treat

Keep myself away from fruits, veggies, and meat

 

I know I sound like I have an eating disorder

Maybe I do, just close to the border

But if I were to say I do eat, I'm a hoarder

You wouldn't believe me, I keep my order

 

My stomach will scream, until I decide for today

What exactly I'm eating; fruit, or chicken fillet

Or if I won't eat at all, I'll just say

I think I won't, or maybe I may

© 2011 Miss Marie Riorden.


Author's Note

Miss Marie Riorden.
Man, I need to eat. . . Ha-ha thus being said. I need to go home.

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This is great, honesty and real. I really like this and yet it can be sad because people do have eating problems.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you are similar in some ways to me...im bi-polar and swing both extremes and one of ny favorite sayings .."Just sayin', Ya know"..read a few of mine and ill read some more of yours..Ty, LAury

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow :P

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I'm going to address this right now. I do take Read Requests, but that DOES NOT mean you need to RR me everything you write. And I do not read stories unless it's of my own free-will. So do not RR the.. more..

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