Please, My Dear

Please, My Dear

A Poem by Miss Marie Riorden.
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Excuse how the commas , <-- are like that. I'm out of that habit now, most of the way.

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I laugh and cherish these perfect moments
For each and every day you're here
My eyes grow bright and my mind clears
And there is not even one little fear
You give me all what I need , this hope
And make sure that nothing is at a tear
When you are here , it's always perfect
And everything seems crystal clear
And then you leave , on this perfect day
And I stare at myself in this mirror
I want you to come back , please my love
Of these bad voices , I don't want to hear
I can see where you sat , and the way you laughed
I want to feel you next to me , close and very near
You can brighten up my darkest day
Now come back , don't leave , please my dear
I know you didn't want to go , leave me all alone
And over the miles , both we can see appear
You standing next to me , I next to you
Now a wonder if it's a mental sear
Each and every day I wait , you wait
We wait for our voices , listening with one ear

© 2011 Miss Marie Riorden.


Author's Note

Miss Marie Riorden.
Olddddddd!!
Still good tho (:

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This may be old but it is still very good! :D It;s almost as though I hear this distant voice begging the person to come back! its sweet and simple, the imagery is fantastic! i love it! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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