Perfection Simplicity

Perfection Simplicity

A Poem by Miss Marie Riorden.
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I guess all things do end. *sighs*

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A perfection simplicity , what you decide to believe
And all my hopes rest on your decision not to leave
And if I close my eyes I can still see you here with me
To see that now , makes my heart feel free
A beautiful contradiction , of this strongest kind
Leaves me to think where my heart is to find
Because I've left the key so far away from here
In all that you have found out , all this fear
You go to look for that key , the one to unlock this girl
In your greatest hope you can keep her mind in a whirl
So that she doesn't feel any of that hurt , any of that pain
And she doesn't see that of people's disdain
You hope to unlock her heart , make it beat true
And you fill her with these words , "We'll make it through"
With each and every smile you see , that lights up her face
You start to believe you can delete that hurt , without a living trace
And maybe you can , you may never know
But through these words you tell her , her real self-starts to show
What it is , compared to what you've seen all this time
Makes you want to see her happy , to sing and to rhyme
And this simplicity that is perfection , to you and only you
Can show through to her , which is what you've wanted to do
Try and make her believe , try and make her see
That not all of this world wants her not to be
Saying that you think she is more than just a girl
And watching her heart, like a flower , start to unfurl
She's spreading her wings , and taking off flight
Thanks to you , on this lightened day tonight
So she can be more than what they have expected of her
And never from your love will she deter

© 2011 Miss Marie Riorden.


Author's Note

Miss Marie Riorden.
Written for someone, who is now my ex. Man, I was naive.

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This is a really wonderful right... so full of emotions that ring true to many girls out in the world, I love the way each line is formed it just drips with imagery! Wonderful job my friend! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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