My Best Friend <3

Scotty, you;re the best brother a girl could ask for. Sweet, caring, and funny! I love you so much (:

You stand through all the hard times

Put a smile on your face

There's not a tear in your voice

Not a feeling misplaced

 

And you know what to say

When I'm feeling down

Even when I'm not at my best

You won't allow me to frown

 

To say I love you, that's right, I do

It's always going to be true

Because you make me yellow when I'm blue

Without a single clue

 

You dry those tears I cry

A smile starts to appear

It seems like that's your only mission

With you, I don't have a fear

 

You're my big brother

Forever I will always love you

There could never be another

That can love me like you do

 

Scotty Gabriel Castiel Coombes

I dedicate this to you

Sincerely from your little sister

Renee Marie Patrowicz, this is true

Author's Note

Friendly poem with simple verse, you think it's alright?

Reviews

[LittleMissSunshine :)]

To say I love you, that's right, I do
It's always going to be true
Because you make me yellow when I'm blue
Without a single clue

This line completely messed up your flow.
I think that if you were to have thought about your word choice in this piece a little longer, it would have come out heaps better. Though that's not to say that it isn't fairly good...it just needs work.

[nicolo]

A priceless treasure: A Best Friend :)