Blank Sheet Of Paper

Kinda inspired by Tim McGraw's song Blank Sheet Of Paper (:

Staring up at him

A blank, lonely man

Whose tears hit my face

While absentmindedly blows the fan

His hand quakes

With a quivering pen taken

He looks so obsolete

And so very shaken

The words he mumbles undescribably

As he tries to think again

He's been sitting here, seems like forever

And he's so scared, he won't move the pen

An hour passed, he stares at me

he caused her hurt, he caused her pain

It's all written in his teared eyes

And oce again they fall like rain

He moves the pen, just a fraction

That lost hope still in his eyes

But then he stops once again

His broken heart has no more tries

And now he stares at me

And I stare at him, this lonely man

Away all his dreams go

And now i'm left, crumpled in the trash can

Author's Note

Does it portray enough emotion ?

Reviews

[Hippie]

yes it does, I like this one