Thoughts

wrote this in last block of school.

This pain in my side is a reminder of my mistakes.
The dark red liquid tells me I'm alive.
Cold metal blades whisper empty words of comfort.
These tears on my face shout that I'm an idiot.

Author's Note

It probably makes no sense...

Reviews

[JanuaryDreamer♥]

I agree with GrandDystopia :) it does make a lot of sense, especially to someone who's been in the same situation and knows what it feels like to have these kind of experiences. very awesome poem! it really spoke to me, and words cant even fully describe how i feel about this poem :) just awesome!

[GrandDystopia]

I think tis makes more sense than you think, we all hurt sometimes, some of u more than others and it's just a case of fighting your way through, as it seems this comes from you're own expieriences, i hope you get through you're pain:)