Autumn (Tanka)

form write

Leafs clutter the ground 

the branches sway to and fro 

it's a lovely sight 

Well, Autumn is in full swing 

and I love the way it feels

Author's Note

Tanka - Each line has
5 - syllables
7 - syllables
5 - syllables
7 - syllables
7 - syllables

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Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I live in the woods....driving today there was a fairly strong wind...the leaves were cluttering the ground...and it is such a beautiful sight.
Did you mean "Leaves"----

[Kim S.]

Probably, I wasn't to sure how to write that word. Thank you I will fix it.

[Writergurl (Mama's Girl..]

I love Autumn, it's perfect weather