The Sun (Haiku)

Haiku

The sun is lovely 

such a beaming sight to see 

leafs lie on the ground.

Author's Note

Not sure if it's supposed to be "lay" or "Lie" in the last line.
Thank you if you review this piece.
It's been a while since I've been back here.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A lovely poem dear Kim. A Indian Summer in Michigan. My trees are still alive and very green. You said everything necessary. I do love the days of Autumn. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Kim S.]

Thank you for you for your review

[poetgurl]

This is a beautiful write Cous'
I love Haiku's they are easy to write.

[Kim S.]

Thank you my lovely Cous'

[Vagi]

I feeling the positivity! Its lie!!

[Kim S.]

Thank you for your review

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"lie"
but you could say its poetic license if "lay" sounds better to you.
Nice image for this fall morning.
j.

[Kim S.]

Thank you so much Jacob. I will correct it. I appreciate your review.

[Vagi]

Yup poets can do anything lay or lie doesn't matter