A Love (Katauta)

Katauta form

His eyes take me in 

his smile, so delightful 

charming like a prince 

Author's Note

Katauta form.....
This form has two different set ups with syllables 5/7/5 or 5/7/7
Describes a love.
Thank you for your review.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Katauta, Sedoka, Tanka, Haiku and Senryu share a few traits but the cultural aspects have largely been neglected and degenerated in westernization. I enjoyed your offering here. I like reading a bit of translated Basho and the more modern, Tanikawa in the wider genre. Nicely done, F.

[Kim S.]

I like studying form writes, and trying my hand at writing them. Off and on I just write a regular poem. I never heard of a sedoka of Basho. Thank you so much for your review.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Basho is the first and greatest haiku poet. A Sedoka is just a pair of three line Katauta generally used as an exchange of dialogue. Most of the more popular Tanka writers are women. "Basho: The Complete Haiku" is a great study guide to the form. It's in my poetry library but I confess I've not read the entirety. So much poetry, so little time. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

When two find perfect place where love is alive. We are very lucky. I liked the situation you create dear Kim. Create a place where love was alive. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Kim S.]

Thank you for your review

[poetgurl]

I like this form, I may have to do this one day.
I enjoyed your write

[Kim S.]

thank you so much cous'

[Writergurl (Mama's Girl..]

Simply wonderful and such a delight. Beautiful

[Kim S.]

Thank you for your review

[Amy R]

Oh WOW,
My heart, full of love,
I enjoyed this piece, it reminded me of someone and that made me smile..
-Amy

[emmajoygreen]

It's always special to enjoy words that remind you of someone especially precious.

[Amy R]

I highly agree Emma! 😊😊

[emmajoygreen]

Beautiful love, just as should be for the form, Kim S. and a delightful visual to headline it.

[Kim S.]

Than you so much for your kind review

[emmajoygreen]

My pleasure, :)

[Chris Shaw]

I have learned something new today. A lovely composition. Full of romance. Thanks for posting Kim.

Chris

[Kim S.]

Thank you so much for your reviews today. Have a great day.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you. You too 🌸